Amazingly, This ones not emo...Hope you like the poem! It's called "Mauritius"?

My ancestors roaming from land to land, plain to plain


Now theres no real meaning to my family name


Your plants,your animals,your people,dazzling with beauty


But one thing i just cant bare,its terrible!The humidity


How I long to hold your small colored grains in my hands, you are now a national park,my seven colored earth


Ive only been able to see you once,I am envious of my parents,theyve been here ever since birth


I long to drown my feet in your clear blue waters


The air every second gets hotter and hotter


These tiny rocks as white as rice,can I hold it in my hands


Your pure tropical snow,the sand


Look at those rainbows of flowers


And the waves!They hit the jagged rocks with such power


Walking through miles of sugar cane fields


Strolling through the outdoor bazar,seeing delicious fruit,you just have to yield


When can I visit you again


When can I see my family whom live on this island


Can I see you soon


When the sun is down and out comes the moon


Soon...


My Paradise

Amazingly, This ones not emo...Hope you like the poem! It's called "Mauritius"?
I really liked your poem and thought you did a really nice job.I would love to see that place where your family is from ' as it sounds lush with flowers and fruits ' totally beautiful. I think this jerk above me knows nothing about poetry as if he did he would know that your a damn good poet and we all know it.... Cami.
Reply:no.


it isn't original.


same old same old.





write something original, happy and not creepy.


I read your poem and i feel dirty.
Reply:Beautifully beautiful!!





Awesomely awesome!!





Great job!! :D :D :D





very descriptive, i like it.
Reply:Very nice. The only thing I can say is it is a litttle wordy. A quick edit will take care of that and you'll have it all polished up. Good Job Grasshopper, Master is pleased. LOL





Ignore the haters. I don't see any of his poetry posted. It is easy to criticize, but difficult to expose one's self.

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